An Untrusted Person

Something Misty was going threw the cold air. Someone had shouted "help help", I Frantically ran to see if  somebody was in trouble. A Crimson thing that I could see was coming closer to me, I didn't know what to do. I made a grave mistake, A dog came barking at me right from out of the Misty mist, a person came Frantically running up to me telling me that she'd been kidnapped and gravely regretted it.  So I took her back to my house making sure the Crimson person didn't follow us from behind. . . When I felt her she was freezing cold, and so was I. I had told her what happened, she'd told me everything she said she also heard another person shouted out I'm coming for you. I started to get worried that we both  would get hurt. Later on someone was knocking on the door Hard as if a criminal was coming. I quickly shouted out "Who is . . What do you want. all was Silence, I'd made a grave mistake trusting the Woman.




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  1. Danni Stone2 May 2018 at 00:10

    Hi Gwynn, I really enjoyed the ending to your quick write as it left the reader wanting to find out what happened next - wonderful! You used lots of different vocabulary and you had some wonderful ideas. I liked the way you described the knock at the door as well! As this was a quick write we don't really edit it (and only spend a short time writing it), but what do you think you might do in our next hundred word challenge.

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